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LoSt by ~black-laced-heart:iconblack-laced-heart:

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The dark clouds surround the glistening moon,
Shining painful light into the depths of her coul,
Tears fall helplessly down her stunning face,
All she wants to do is run from this evil place.
No more lies,
No more pain,
All she wants is to be free again.
Lost in thought,
Lost in prayer,
Why can't she hold onto what she doth fear?
Afraid to let go,
Afraid to say goodbye,
Once more fighting with the thoughts locked inside of her mind.
She drops to her knees,
Tears no longer able to fall freely,
She screams....
Letting go of all her pain,
Knowing she will be with him once again,
She lets go for a little while,
And fades away....
©2004-2010 ~black-laced-heart
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Author's Comments

This is to my dear *diosaperdida, may all your thoughts, fears and tears be shared amoungst your friends. You will see your wonderful father again in time. Let he be in your heart and mind forever as you shall be in mine.
Love And Respect...
:hug:

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~tsubume Jun 10, 2004, 1:16:49 AM
I usually don't like rhymes, but there's something about this that I find irresistable. Good job, dear.

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~black-laced-heart Jun 10, 2004, 1:19:54 AM
why thankyou...its not the best piece i must say...but im glad u liked it!

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and so the world turns and we sink deeper and deeper into the hollows of our own minds....
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=diosaperdida Jun 10, 2004, 7:12:42 AM
I dont have words...

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I am often afraid. But I am never a coward.
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~silentology Jun 10, 2004, 7:35:58 AM
this is just ahhh! :tears:

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love azure:heart:
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~theforgottenvampire Jun 10, 2004, 2:13:39 PM
"She screams....
Letting go of all her pain,
Knowing she will be with him once again,
She lets go for a little while,
And fades away.... "

this was so very touching.
i teared up at this part.

so beauiful

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~under shade silhouettess~
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~sapphireflame Jun 10, 2004, 5:09:43 PM
I love this ... something about it just really struck a chord.... really awesome.
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~tiger-queen Jun 10, 2004, 9:57:33 PM
wow, that is really truly wonderful. ur talent is amazing

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~WindBurned Jun 11, 2004, 7:37:28 AM
awesome work. :hug:

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"Art does not depict exactly what the artist sees, but it is a picture of the psyche of the artist as he perceives the world around him." -Tim Hinck
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~black-laced-heart Jun 12, 2004, 1:16:28 AM
:hug:

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and so the world turns and we sink deeper and deeper into the hollows of our own minds....
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~black-laced-heart Jun 12, 2004, 1:18:43 AM
wat do u mean?

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and so the world turns and we sink deeper and deeper into the hollows of our own minds....
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